Final Feedback.

 Feedback.

After making my advertisement I created a google form in order to receive feedback from my peers. This helped me to better my editing on the advert. 

From the statistics you can see below, the point of my advert as well as who the advertisement is for, meaning i met the brief in some of the most important aspects.

I was advised to add more Mind logos throughout the survey, giving me the indication to change this after my first draft. I was also told that you couldn't tell who the target audience was which is something I'm concerned about considering I thought I did a good job at portraying that part of my advert.

In my next draft I will change the sound effects for the heavy breathing as my feedback say it wasn't to their liking, this being an issue if it doesn't appeal to everyone. Overall I was given different views on my advertisement from those that answered the survey. I think there are a lot of things I could improve on in time.